| = ! & | Corina Gina Papouis [20.Jun.14 12:46] |
| it is a poem that really blows the mind of the reader! It has power, it is assertive, direct, without veils and velvet ribbons and It would shine more if you consider the following: 1 - when using the F word you need to place the text under explicit language (icon at the bottom of the text when you edit it!) 2 - quite a few misspellings and grammar adjustments needed: i.e. snore, are waiting for me, an eagle, he thinks, rains inside us, where I have been. Please do correct them so I can give this text the deserved appreciation! For now I have to place this in the workshop, I hope you come back to it soon. Kind regards! | |
| = thanks! | Dorina Șișu [04.Jul.14 11:46] |
| Thanks for noting. I will proceed the corrected text kind regards! | |