= I wondered about the punctuation. It can be such a vital element, but fluid (esp | Edward Wells II [19.Mar.16 08:41] |
"Someone caressed me with eyes, that had blossomed roses hands thoughts haven’t met them anymore, when I cleared the dreams way." This stanza has a very different quality than the others. This is the stanza I sat with. The last line returns so close to the quality of this stanza. Thanks for that. | |