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 =  Repetitions...
The poem is valuable, and for that reason I would advise reconsider
"But other voices say I might
I soon might find another track"
It would be IMO better to avoid the dissonant repetitions.

Looking forward to hopefully another version for the main page.

rcm

 =  Thank you
Radu Ioan Tudosan
[08.Jan.23 17:09]
Thank you for suggestion. I think now it's better




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