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+ Fragile and deep
What a beautiful, ethereally fragile, yet deep sigh, Raj!
It played all my rusting, fading, chords of poetry hunger.
How glad to see you again!

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I am more than happy welcoming you to granting recognition through Stars!

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raj thampi
[20.Apr.23 12:57]
I am humbled beyond words Romulus! Thank you very much. I've been around, mostly managing monologues :). I spent few days to decide about the third line, that visual haunting me through days and nights (May be a flashback from the movies I have watched earlier). After the line, I asked AI to rate my poem. AI picked the same line & told me what it thought about it & I decided to post :))

I hope to come back more often

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raj thampi
[20.Apr.23 10:26]
I am humbled beyond words Romulus! You were always kind to me. I did comment earlier & not sure whether it is pending moderation. I was not reading/writing much from last few years. Whatever I managed were more like monologues, couldn't come up with reasons to post them.
This poem(?), I spent three days to finalize the line "dragging her silk over the muddy paths" & against some wonderful comments from my close friends, asked one of the AI chat bots to rate my write.
I was amazed when AI told me about the line I was so obsessed with & gave me the courage to post here. I'm not yet feeling emotions worth words, they are playing a hide and seek game with me...this time it feels like longer.

Thanks once again, for remembering me.

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You were never forgotten, dear Raj!

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raj thampi
[05.Jul.23 07:49]
I was in IASI for a day, 23rd of June. I thought of contacting you through your blog and somehow didn't manage it. Well, next time.




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