| = this is not good | Dana Muºat [04.Nov.05 16:26] |
| "it’s snowing with white roses"-it's to used, not original metaphora. It is a simple text, i can't find the symbols, the colour of words in it. You have better texts, but this is the worst. | |
| = :( | Ianosi Andrada [05.Nov.05 06:46] |
| Ok...is it better now? Please tell me... | |
| = To Andrada and Dana Muºat | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [05.Nov.05 08:00] |
| Pls. be considerate, give her a break, I know we sometimes need to be subjective and bold, but then we should not blabber sometimes, coz we might pissed off somebody, any way keep on writing andrada! I will like it always coz it's your work, once you changed it coz of others advice it might be as well not your own text anymore, coz for me once you welcomed others suggestion you'll gonna lost half of your existence in your own text, keep it to yours to prove the authenticity! good luck andrada Gotta go now bye! | |
| = Josh | Ianosi Andrada [05.Nov.05 16:29] |
| I know. You're right. But this time Dana was right too. I mean "it's snowing with white roses" wasn't an original metaphora (although i haven't read it anywhere else, but i have to admit that it sounds pretty familiar). Thanks again for your kind words, Josh and hope i didn't dissapoint you :( Andrada | |
| = Andrada | Dana Muºat [05.Nov.05 19:58] |
| Andrada, yes, is better. U don't have to desilussionate yourself. Try to learn and read more. This is the only advice i can give it to you. I have told you that you have better texts...that means something. And..one more thing...the title is good, i liked it, that's way i have read your text. See you soon! | |
| = Dana and andrada | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [06.Nov.05 02:13] |
| There is nothing for me to get mad andrada, i just did give my shot thats all! any way Dana I understand your just helping Andrada, it just so happened that whe i read your comment I remembered something, that seems to be the yesterday, when those silly american friends of mine said something straight forward as if they are bold, I hate that kind of thing! they don't think of what they say and that was about my english. But now I'm a different person I know my english is better now, there is nothing for me to worry about, except for my american colloquialism, I am used to it, i always use it especially in my later poems, but i haven't posted that poems in here! I just hope I haven't pissed you off about that blabber thing! I just remember something, so lets just forget about it okay! Andrada and Dana I love you both! :-) | |