| = Even text......Just normal | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [05.Nov.05 04:49] |
| Hey, hindi mo sa akin sinabi na sa U.S ka pala mag dadaos ng sembrek ninyo, mag aaral kapa ba sa perpetual? I guess, baka hindi na no! hindi ko alam yun ah! uy kita kitz nalang jan kapag pumunta kami ha! Any way as of the text: an okay journal, a personal expression of thoughts, authentic! an *even* text! it's just fine, Advise: why don't you use american colloquialism it would look and sound cool to read, perhaps its just a journal not a poetry with such rules keep on writing! | |
| = Meggane | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [05.Nov.05 08:11] |
| There are some typo considered as grammar errors! try to correct it please, its just a grammar. I know you'll notice your typos | |
| = My last comment here also | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [08.Nov.05 03:15] |
| your typo, I guess I have to mention it! your parents tries to bring you *PARENTS is a plural form but then the form of verb you used is in singular, try without [s] plural form of verb ex. All the lions try to eat the gazelle. Trie[s] with [s] is a form of singular verb ex. The lion tries to eat the deer. it would sound better if you will remove the me from the torturing. I guess Your using alot of american grammars, well I guess its your style, as they always say English is dynamic. bye | |
| = P.S | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [08.Nov.05 03:18] |
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