| = Black rose immortal | Raul Huluban [27.Jan.06 01:04] |
| You're poem is like a part of a melody and it has a romanticist air to my mind. First verse I like most, that image created so well but the last line it would be better to separate it from rest 'cause it's like a conclusion or a trick. | |
| = Attraction/Interaction | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [27.Jan.06 04:04] |
| Those line states an attraction towards certain things, or I should say a natural force, those themes are hiding from within, my true feeling hides in some metaphors. on those reaction towards the nature are atleast related to my basis, as of ultra affinity, can you imagaine on how you'll be attracted on the beauty of roses of which the fireflies give-off allures decorating a brilliance inside the roses, a glowing red rose, it's a powerful stuff for me, I'm fully attracted, can you imagine the beauty of dew under the greens, where they're as much as of those pretty crystals, giving such undefined brilliance towards the foliages, and again I'm very much attracted.... The conclusion shows that My attraction towards something puts me in the pitfall of madness, so much captivated.... thnx 4 d comment Dude! | |