Members comments:

= !?
Marius Surleac
[29.Feb.08 10:24]
Ok!
You have some expressions that don’t look too good. For example: you can not say "I need a space" but you can say "I need space/I need some space" because space can not be "a"; "don't loose" you can change it with "don't loose yourself". Try to fix it and maybe you will get out your text from workshop!

= Thank you.
Balc Oana Nicoleta
[03.Mar.08 21:06]
tx for ur oppinion and that u read me:) means a lot for me.

No anonymous comments allowed !
In order to post comments and texts
you must have an account and then LOGIN !

Go back !

Warning: Unknown: write failed: No space left on device (28) in Unknown on line 0

Warning: Unknown: Failed to write session data (files). Please verify that the current setting of session.save_path is correct (/var/www/dynamic/-agonia.v3-2/www/tmp) in Unknown on line 0

= !?	Marius Surleac [29.Feb.08 10:24]
Ok! You have some expressions that don’t look too good. For example: you can not say "I need a space" but you can say "I need space/I need some space" because space can not be "a"; "don't loose" you can change it with "don't loose yourself". Try to fix it and maybe you will get out your text from workshop!

= Thank you.	Balc Oana Nicoleta [03.Mar.08 21:06]
tx for ur oppinion and that u read me:) means a lot for me.