| = !!! | Marius Surleac [09.Jun.08 08:27] |
| I like how you pointed the celebration of New Year and joining together (both family and friends), but I think that in the one of the last stanzas would be more suitable to use "this year, every year". Cheers from Marius! | |
| = worthy suggestion | mazHur [09.Jun.08 16:06] |
| Yes, I agree with your worthy suggestion and have corrected the line accordingly. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting best wishes | |