| = Good job Chris! | Marius Surleac [21.Feb.08 10:37] |
| Nice fall of images, it looks like a short dialogue between the disciple and the master, so that's why I think that questioning yourself, you try to find answers from God. I don't know if I am right but I wait for your answer to tell me if I'm wrong or not! Glad to hear you my friend! Very good job! | |
| = are you sure we are not brothers? | Christopher Thripp [22.Feb.08 11:43] |
| We all look for truth and ponder lifes difficult questions...our creator is the only one who can educate us and guide us .....so i was asking of him ..."in my room". | |
| = red star.....thank you ... | Christopher Thripp [22.Feb.08 11:46] |
| I would like to thank agonia for the recommendation... very much appreciated... | |
| = You're welcome Chris! | Marius Surleac [22.Feb.08 12:11] |
| You well dispose me and for sure we're not brothers :)). You're welcome and glad to hear you! | |
| + Pace - Chris | Edilberto González Trejos [23.Feb.08 16:21] |
| Hello Poet, I like the pace and introspection in the verses. I will surely read more of your work. Truly SONGO | |
| = cheers songo. | Christopher Thripp [24.Feb.08 15:20] |
| thank you songo...you give me a big compliment... | |
| = plus | Daniela Voicu [25.Feb.08 15:45] |
| i love that poem ..good job ...!!! | |
| = multumesc "daniela" | Christopher Thripp [01.Mar.08 17:13] |
| thank you daniela...you pay me a big compliment also...you inspire me to be better... | |
| = thank you. | Christopher Thripp [01.Mar.08 17:30] |
| thanks daniela | |
| = romantic | Monica David [01.Mar.08 21:47] |
| Well it is a beautiful poem, is somehow a classic poem, it remembers me of the classics, the style you wrote. | |
| = thank you so much... | Christopher Thripp [02.Mar.08 01:44] |
| thank you monica... i am flattered by your comments | |
| = MoonAngel | Lynn West [25.Mar.08 14:39] |
| You, my friend, are a poet true. | |
| = cheers. | Christopher Thripp [25.Mar.08 19:49] |
| thank you lynn...i appreciate your comments. | |
| = cofident hope* | sayed iltaf haider [01.Nov.08 21:27] |
| The imagery is extremely simple. The gap between belief and desired actions is highlighted with confident hope. | |