| = wrote from your heart ... | Christopher Thripp [22.Feb.08 11:44] |
| great job andy...my "ol" freind. | |
| = good | Daniela Voicu [01.Mar.08 17:22] |
| good job! | |
| = my opinion about... | Marius Surleac [07.Apr.08 10:53] |
| Again the same problem: the repeating is pointless here. More than 70% from the text is repeated with no specification, you've modified only some stanzas but the skeleton of the text is the same. Try to fix the problem and I think that you'll pass out the text from the Workshop. The idea is ok but needs to be improved. As I said before, the repetition is good, but too much repetition is annoying. Cheers! | |