| = thanks dani. | Christopher Thripp [24.Mar.08 18:10] |
| yes we are. | |
| = !!! | Marius Surleac [17.Apr.08 14:20] |
| Daniela, my opinion is that you should try to improve the text to look more like a haiku. My suggestion would be something like that: "I’ve ended myself - the wish for the start is lost at the sunset’s frame". Try to put new ideas and tide the stanzas together. Hope the text will get out from the Workshop! Cheers! | |
| = ...... | Daniela Voicu [29.Apr.08 16:56] |
| my opinion ..its to live me alone...marius | |
| = .... | Daniela Voicu [29.Apr.08 16:56] |
| to leave ... yeh right | |