| = I guillotined my comment... | Marius Surleac [07.Mar.08 16:09] |
| A true image for a cruel death of Marie-Anne Charlotte Corday d'Armont alias "decapitated C", a warrior woman that "danced" till the final moment: DEATH. About the death by guillotine, it is something normal that the eyes, the mouth still works few seconds after cutting the head - this is because the brain doesn't dye immediately after cut off, the blood circulation through brain will allow few seconds of consciousness to the victim. Nice work Dan! I like you tough writing style... Waiting for something like that... Cheers and congratulations! | |
| = great work. | Christopher Thripp [07.Mar.08 20:53] |
| excellent job my freind... | |
| = Charlotte Corday | Bogdan G. Marin [13.May.08 21:14] |
| Great Poetic Art. Note: I read that she was also slapped, after being decapitated... | |
| + Doing the "Severed Head".... | John Willy Kopperud [13.May.08 22:36] |
| ...keeping up the intensity all through the poem, Dan. Congratulations from Willy | |
| = * Willy... | Bogdan G. Marin [14.May.08 08:03] |
| Great! I was hoping this poem will get a star. | |
| = . | dan marius [14.May.08 17:10] |
| glad you liked it. thanks | |