| = ... | Christopher Thripp [28.Mar.08 03:01] |
| great use of words in this poem...to descibe love you cannot have. | |
| = Lynn West | Lynn West [31.Mar.08 20:40] |
| Thank you, Chris. Ah, yet I be the fool?... for I believe. | |
| = waiting... | Marius Surleac [28.Mar.08 15:08] |
| Lovely romantic poem... There is time; there are questions about and space that keeps us warm for some wonderful moments in our life. As Chris said, it's a little hard but descriptions can make paintings for a strange metamorphosis. Good job Lynn! P.S. I think that the text can be put as a poem, not prose. have a nice day! | |