| = funny... | Marius Surleac [20.Apr.08 16:27] |
| This is quite very Visual poem, that's why during the reading in my mind the exactly image thundered me. But also is very funny, I started to laugh after I read it. Beautiful one Chris! | |
| = In addition to the funny point you make... | John Willy Kopperud [20.Apr.08 18:10] |
| ...I like the rhytm here. Seven, six and five syllables in the consecutive lines. Makes good musical timing. Cheers from Willy | |
| = very true... | Marius Surleac [20.Apr.08 19:27] |
| You're absolutely right Willy, it flows melodically and supports the real reason of running... Cheers! | |
| = thank you willy and marius. | Christopher Thripp [20.Apr.08 19:37] |
| I love it when people get it ...thank you both for seeing the funny and the verse...a lot more involved with this than first meets the eye. | |
| = Cheers | Lynn West [20.Apr.08 20:51] |
| absolutely!! I love it... well done with so few words! | |
| = thanks. | Christopher Thripp [22.Apr.08 01:07] |
| thank you too lynn. | |