| = good bones | Mike Aspros [28.Apr.08 10:30] |
| of a poem, my opinion that you can make this have more depth. You could add some repetition of words (i.e. I dream them with you...) with variations. This poem speaks of the simple times/ places that we miss someone when we shared it with them. Very good concept. "I dream them with you" is an excellent writing que ---thank you Lynn! | |
| = daydreaming focus... | Marius Surleac [28.Apr.08 13:42] |
| A lot of images for a true daydreaming; we all have this kind of moments when we see the beautiful side of the nature, we have that kind of click that stars taking pictures when daydreaming approaches. Cheers Lynn! | |