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= first stanza
Mike Aspros
[28.Apr.08 10:16]
is very insightful, bloodless overthrow is sweet and made ruins of the former government, nice use of words to describe this. The second stanza is unclear to me although I have the impression you are trying to connect with someone you knew but overwhelmed by the obstacles? In any case, I enjoy reading you work. thank you.

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= first stanza	Mike Aspros [28.Apr.08 10:16]
is very insightful, bloodless overthrow is sweet and made ruins of the former government, nice use of words to describe this. The second stanza is unclear to me although I have the impression you are trying to connect with someone you knew but overwhelmed by the obstacles? In any case, I enjoy reading you work. thank you.