| = !!! | Marius Surleac [12.May.08 18:58] |
| You can improve the text; first try to work to the syntax, then you should give to the poem a more poetic stance, then you should try to keep a main idea of the text...from what I see now, the stanzas are quite different and needs improvement! | |
| = Towards Heaven | Cornel Costea [25.May.08 22:10] |
| Dear Marius, Thanks for your advice. They will help me to write better in the future. | |