| = Yeow! | Mike Aspros [29.Apr.08 20:19] |
| A struggle you are enduring! I'm glad you found a refuge to build upon. I enjoy your tone (voice), like you are preaching out loud in something you have conviction. Very good poem. Words and poetry will keep us all focused on the light. Cheers! | |
| = you're always welcome Mike! | Marius Surleac [29.Apr.08 20:27] |
| Thank you Mike for offering me a very good comment. You're quite right about a part of the text, about the preaching for finding the right pathway in life into a communion with God. Cheers and thank you. Marius! | |
| = oh, yes... | Mike Aspros [29.Apr.08 21:31] |
| I see it, beautiful...I learned this recently, poet comes from greek word meaning Maker...God being the Maker of all poetry. Cheers, Mike | |
| = great. | Christopher Thripp [30.Apr.08 04:40] |
| very visual...now you know i love visual ...great job marius... | |
| = thank you Chris! | Marius Surleac [30.Apr.08 09:01] |
| And you're always welcome. Indeed the poem is very visual, but my opinion is that this kind of visual is much deeper. Cheers my friend! | |
| = deep visual text. | Christopher Thripp [01.May.08 16:15] |
| exactly my point there good friend.. | |