| = shadows in night... | Marius Surleac [03.May.08 08:25] |
| very visual this poem Chris! "Shadows are long", "Rustles leaves", "moon filtered" - nice and finally "the birds rest". Good job! | |
| = u sure? | Daniela Voicu [03.May.08 10:48] |
| u are sure? | |
| = thanks | Christopher Thripp [04.May.08 17:43] |
| yeh i am very sure dani ...thanks marius and thanks dani .....but are u sure needs to explainded lol. | |
| = oh ...sorry | Christopher Thripp [06.May.08 05:32] |
| explainded oh my word sorry about that... | |
| = wonderful | Mike Aspros [07.May.08 18:29] |
| I like the way you illustrate your decision process with the moon, leaves, and birds. Very poetic Chris. Although there is movement in the description of text, I keep rereading it, there is stillness to this poem. well done. cheers! | |
| = thank you mike.... | Christopher Thripp [08.May.08 04:03] |
| our moon i am the wind complicated but hopefully easy to read .......all is calm now ...thank you mike appreciated indeed... | |
| = H | felix nicolau [14.May.08 15:26] |
| maybe it's not very new, but it has sensitivity and a welcome simplicity of tone | |
| = long wait felix... | Christopher Thripp [14.May.08 17:52] |
| well felix i have written 75 poems 2 on recomemended reading ..this is the first you comment on ...so you must have liked this one...I thank you for your comments you are always welcome...thank you | |