| = interesting... | Marius Surleac [07.May.08 11:22] |
| Interesting definition of the man but I do not understand why he's eternal sad? Your poem gave me the sensation of Brancusi's "The Thinker". Cheers! | |
| = cheers | Christopher Thripp [08.May.08 04:24] |
| great job made me think a little ...end less ly | |
| = Daniel Lacatus | Luminita Suse [09.May.08 15:46] |
| Daniel, I will be direct and suggest revising the verse "endless sad". It could be either "endlessly sad", as Christopher graciously suggested, or "endless sadness". A bit cliche the verse "forgotten by the angels" where the article "the" is really superfluous. Interesting point of view on the essence of manhood, though. | |