| = my opinion and advice... | Marius Surleac [13.May.08 08:22] |
| I do not know why many times solitude is directly connected with the drink. Mixed drinks are not good for the brain and the body itself as well. I see this kind of connection for a period of time quite short when reality is dissolved and the pain and hardships are lighter than before. Hope you're not experimenting what you expressed above, because I have experimented before and it was for no use to me, more than that attracts antipathy from the beloved ones. Cheers Chris! | |
| = thank you . | Christopher Thripp [13.May.08 08:38] |
| no marius i work 6 days a week including weekends i dont get time to eat let alone experiment...this is a hazy look down the memory lane of my youth and a warning!!mixed with a little satire and you are correct it attracts family and repells friends.I appreciate your comments... | |
| = Sparkling... | Irene Singleton [13.May.08 09:33] |
| Visual, striking and makes me feel "in your room" with you -so I can tell you to shake out of it!!! lol. Good job :) | |
| = As a glimpse of intense youthful mourning - the absence... | John Willy Kopperud [13.May.08 09:50] |
| ...of love, this is certainly good and recognizably written, Chris! In the second last stanza you try to pull yourself together and soldier on. That makes, thank God, a whole lot of difference to a large number of other contributions on this site! Cheers from Willy | |
| = ode to willy... | Christopher Thripp [14.May.08 18:05] |
| willy you have commented on much of my work that i have published on this site and i thank you...the comment you left here is a the exact meaning of why i continue to write and you have me down pat...visual..resolvement...and unique refreshing honest views putting my self and my life in front of the fireing squad for all to witness. As with all comments of my poems this inspires me my friend... | |
| = irene. | Christopher Thripp [14.May.08 18:28] |
| thank you irene...glad to see you writing i wondered how long before you could not resist anymore ...this is a fantastic outlet for your life and feelings to be expressed in such a thereputic way such as writing...anyone can write poetry but life experience puts the visual element into your work...to also be poetic with words is a whole new ball game you have either got it or you have not...that's where the natural talent comes in... | |
| = wonderful poem | Mike Aspros [15.May.08 08:22] |
| Chris, adding my two cents, as I pass by... | |
| = thanks | Christopher Thripp [15.May.08 13:14] |
| thanks mike | |