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Marius Surleac
[21.May.08 20:42]
See that the questions should be marked with "?". I think that the text should be polished in a more poetic shape; what I see is more "personals" than "poetry".
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Christopher Thripp
[23.May.08 01:56]
i think it's great just a tweak here and there great words and will be a great poem...feeling it regina more please.

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= !!!	Marius Surleac [21.May.08 20:42]
See that the questions should be marked with "?". I think that the text should be polished in a more poetic shape; what I see is more "personals" than "poetry".

= feeling it.	Christopher Thripp [23.May.08 01:56]
i think it's great just a tweak here and there great words and will be a great poem...feeling it regina more please.