| = !!! | Marius Surleac [29.May.08 09:17] |
| The first part of the poem (first five stanzas) it is ok and flows perfectly. I suggest you to work a little bit to the syntax of the last three stanzas. It can get out of Workshop. Cheers! | |
| = Thanks! | Cornel Costea [31.May.08 00:03] |
| Dear Oscar, Thanks for your "wow...Great!" It's very important to me! I'll try to improve my text. I hope that it will be better. Cornel. | |
| = It's time | Cornel Costea [31.May.08 00:03] |
| Dear Marius, I have modified the last three stanzas.Do you think that, now, the poem is better? Thanks a lot! Cornel. | |
| = nice poem | Marius Surleac [31.May.08 10:04] |
| Now it looks better and flows in one way in a fast at first but slower rhyme at the end of poem. Sincerely, Marius | |