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Marius Surleac
[31.May.08 07:59]
There are some grammar mistakes, maybe from typing the text. Please revise. Thank you!
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Marius Surleac
[01.Jun.08 08:20]
First of all, there are a lot of mistakes (spelling and syntax):

- “Norberto, also, in certain way flirted with she” = “Norberto, also, in certain way flirted with her”
- “discret glances” = “discreet glances”
- “and always folloied” = “and always followed”
- “maked Norberto did "break the ice" again” = “made Norberto to "break the ice" again”
- “You’re where, exactly?” = “Where’re you from, exactly?
- “Stored the hair, looking for he” = “Stored the hair, looking for her/him”
- “If us are safe...” = “If we are safe...”
- “the love that their bodies revelead” = “the love that their bodies revealed”
- “Oh, that was the most crazy thing I've ever done” = “Oh, that was the craziest thing I've ever done”
- “Me not also” = “Me also”
- “Yes, It’s, but I coulded hurt” = “Yes, but it could hurt”
- “Not meant nothing more than saying this guy” = “Not meant anything more than saying this guy”
- “If had used she” = “If had used her”
- “You’re want to kill me?” = “You wanted to kill me?”

And also I would like to explain me “she-ass”

Please revise! Thank you!

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= !!!	Marius Surleac [31.May.08 07:59]
There are some grammar mistakes, maybe from typing the text. Please revise. Thank you!

= !!!	Marius Surleac [01.Jun.08 08:20]
First of all, there are a lot of mistakes (spelling and syntax): - “Norberto, also, in certain way flirted with she” = “Norberto, also, in certain way flirted with her” - “discret glances” = “discreet glances” - “and always folloied” = “and always followed” - “maked Norberto did "break the ice" again” = “made Norberto to "break the ice" again” - “You’re where, exactly?” = “Where’re you from, exactly? - “Stored the hair, looking for he” = “Stored the hair, looking for her/him” - “If us are safe...” = “If we are safe...” - “the love that their bodies revelead” = “the love that their bodies revealed” - “Oh, that was the most crazy thing I've ever done” = “Oh, that was the craziest thing I've ever done” - “Me not also” = “Me also” - “Yes, It’s, but I coulded hurt” = “Yes, but it could hurt” - “Not meant nothing more than saying this guy” = “Not meant anything more than saying this guy” - “If had used she” = “If had used her” - “You’re want to kill me?” = “You wanted to kill me?” And also I would like to explain me “she-ass” Please revise! Thank you!