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 =  nice poem...
Marius Surleac
[31.May.08 10:49]
Great. Perfect description for a false paradise that is to be found in our societies. I like your British writing style, makes me think to the old English writers. The 9th and 10th stanzas are extraordinary, powerful and elegant.

Cheers and welcome back Chris!

 =  thank u
Christopher Thripp
[01.Jun.08 04:29]
thank you marius ..you pay me great compliment...i appreciate your comments....

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Daniela Voicu
[10.Jun.08 08:10]
nice poem




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