| = true... | Marius Surleac [09.Jun.08 11:54] |
| You know how to put a different mysterious shape to what you present us using words, poetry. The same with the painting you pointed out especially with the last five stanzas of the poem. Niceee! | |
| = :) | Vicleanu Mihaita [09.Jun.08 12:05] |
| thank you marius ..i'm very glad you enjoy reading what i write | |
| = A story told... | John Willy Kopperud [09.Jun.08 12:57] |
| ...from art's own point of view. Intriguing, Vicleanu! In the next last stanza I have to point out that TRUSTILY looker is incorrect, please find another solution. Also; hang me INTO his room should be substituted by hang me IN his room. Cheers from Willy | |
| = . | Vicleanu Mihaita [09.Jun.08 13:45] |
| thank you willy, for your suggestions. i appreciate it | |
| = You found very good solutions... | John Willy Kopperud [09.Jun.08 15:08] |
| ...to the problems I presented for you in the second next stanza. The poem did in fact improve, both on a grammatical and an artistic level. Cheers from Willy | |
| = my kind regards | Vicleanu Mihaita [09.Jun.08 15:17] |
| thank you... i couldn't have done it without you. | |