| = A splendid... | John Willy Kopperud [17.Jun.08 12:03] |
| ...intense and beautiful depection of longing. Poetry IS devine, nicht wahr? Cheers from Willy | |
| = Kind regads! | Vicleanu Mihaita [17.Jun.08 12:14] |
| Thank you Willy for your words!! I'm glad you liked my poem. ... and poetry is divine.. | |
| + great job Mihai! | Marius Surleac [17.Jun.08 12:19] |
| Smart depicted picture well used the images and the idea and the final stanza shows a painful break from the chains of maternal love, and "heavenly" as you said. P.S. Willy, why "nicht wahr"? - or "nichts nicht wahr"? Best wishes to both, Marius | |
| = My kind regards | Vicleanu Mihaita [17.Jun.08 12:21] |
| thank you Marius! I'm really happy reading your words. | |
| = love hurts/ nazareth | dan marius [17.Jun.08 14:22] |
| yes, well love hurts. love hurts. love hurts. did I say that already? | |
| = The languages seem to mix up... | John Willy Kopperud [17.Jun.08 16:44] |
| ...a bit every now and then these days in Babylon, Marius! Cheers from Willy | |
| = May I ? | Adam Catalina [18.Jul.08 12:08] |
| -Didn’t you read the first pages? You are already conceived, you must be burned now. It’s time; nature is pushing. Let me decorate reality for you. I will sing a background song wile drawing you a beautiful portrait for the cover, I will dedicate you a poem; you will be my muse. I desire you, you must be burned. - A poem, you say… -A Clevian love poem. As if we were split by Moses and he would forget to rejoin our muddy waters, so troubled by longing.. As if I’ve come out of your body, as a twin of holy love, and I’ve died as a traveller, on my way to the motherly god. And I’m no more your child, in the vastly nothingness of solitude. You, my heavenly love, how I lost myself from your bosom... | |
| = i think that | Rodica Vasilescu [09.Oct.12 17:25] |
| this is a great poem with one exception. the way it ends, i don't like it, it's predictable. the splitting waters part is great not because you thought at it but because you had the nice inspiration to say that that they never rejoined :) i really expected to see the oposite, so i got surprised. | |
| = twin of holy love! | pacurari alexandra [14.Aug.08 11:20] |
| so powerful so think of twins of love, original and deep. Short verses that make you think lots, simple words with different meanings. Keep up the good work! | |
| = . | Vicleanu Mihaita [16.Aug.08 11:01] |
| I thank the both of you for reading. my kind regards. | |
| = very good*** | sayed iltaf haider [01.Nov.08 21:26] |
| Nice poetical effort to depict the loss which is not easy to repair. | |
| = :) | Vicleanu Mihaita [01.Nov.08 21:39] |
| Thank you, friend. I am glad you liked it. My kind regards, Mihai | |