| + welcome back Paul, congrats! | Marius Surleac [26.Jun.08 09:05] |
| Great imagery, nice words, powerful (the first two stanzas are extraordinary), smart metaphors. "Callous words" for callous sensations, plasticity. Well done Paul! Sincerely, Marius | |
| = great job andy... | Christopher Thripp [27.Jun.08 05:09] |
| i agree with marius ...great work andy ...tuff thoughts and emotions to deal with .. | |
| = When someone succeds in writing a poem, the finishing touch... | John Willy Kopperud [27.Jun.08 19:40] |
| ...is always refined. - Bear a shield of thoughts for future defense Yeah...that rings true. Cheers from Willy | |