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= my opinion!
Marius Surleac
[24.Jul.08 10:21]
You can improve the idea of the poem if you polish it a little, especially the last second part of the poem. There are some expressions that don’t sound good!

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= my opinion!	Marius Surleac [24.Jul.08 10:21]
You can improve the idea of the poem if you polish it a little, especially the last second part of the poem. There are some expressions that don’t sound good!