| = not say | Mike Aspros [05.Aug.08 03:48] |
| anything vocally and your mind saying goodbye, good capture chris you polished up a nice poem here. best, | |
| = sight | Ecaterina Bargan [06.Aug.08 11:03] |
| so, initial i don't liked this poetry, becouse i thinked it is too short. but readind more careful i liked the first stanza. maybe it would be better with /cuting/ for /biting/. | |
| = thank you ecaterina and mike. | Christopher Thripp [06.Aug.08 20:05] |
| ecaterina... thank you for commenting i appreciate your input... i hope you read more of my work toget a better understanding of my ideas... oh and thank you mike long time no see...appreciated. | |
| = Hi Chris | Mike Aspros [07.Aug.08 07:37] |
| its good to be back. this is great space for a poet, best | |
| = brain freeze perspective | Marius Surleac [07.Aug.08 11:50] |
| You're right about the above said in your poem Chris. The repetition of the expression is because of the brain freezing in time and space. Cheers! | |
| = cheers marius | Christopher Thripp [07.Aug.08 16:30] |
| thanks marius glad you are back ... | |
| = thank you ... | Christopher Thripp [08.Aug.08 20:30] |
| thank you all for your comments much appreciated. | |