+ invitation...to feel same sensations | Marius Surleac [07.Aug.08 11:40] |
Wonderful text, great flow of the rhyme, rhythm, memories from past well described, high tensed sensations, romantic shadow underneath the words – we all have similar moments like these. Well done! Marius | |
= Wonderful! | Corina Gina Papouis [07.Aug.08 12:13] |
Anna, wonderful poem. The sense of sadness and longing captured beautifully! Cheers, Corina | |
= thank you | Christopher Thripp [07.Aug.08 16:59] |
i agree with above great job ... | |
= wonderful | Mike Aspros [07.Aug.08 19:25] |
Thank you for sharing your poem. I enjoyed reading over it again and again. Look forward to more of your work. best, | |
= nice | Lynn West [08.Aug.08 07:57] |
beautifully done! | |
= Our parks | Simona Sumanaru [10.Aug.08 10:36] |
We all have our parks somewhere in the world, where we've left a piece of our heart to rest on a bench with a love that is no more. Thank you for allowing me to reminisce. Great sensibility in your verse, Anna, and beautiful rhyming! | |