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+ invitation...to feel same sensations
Marius Surleac
[07.Aug.08 11:40]
Wonderful text, great flow of the rhyme, rhythm, memories from past well described, high tensed sensations, romantic shadow underneath the words – we all have similar moments like these.

Well done!

Marius

 =  Wonderful!
Corina Gina Papouis
[07.Aug.08 12:13]
Anna, wonderful poem. The sense of sadness and longing captured beautifully!

Cheers,

Corina

 =  thank you
Christopher Thripp
[07.Aug.08 16:59]
i agree with above great job ...

 =  wonderful
Mike Aspros
[07.Aug.08 19:25]
Thank you for sharing your poem. I enjoyed reading over it again and again. Look forward to more of your work. best,

 =  nice
Lynn West
[08.Aug.08 07:57]
beautifully done!

 =  Our parks
Simona Sumanaru
[10.Aug.08 10:36]
We all have our parks somewhere in the world, where we've left a piece of our heart to rest on a bench with a love that is no more. Thank you for allowing me to reminisce. Great sensibility in your verse, Anna, and beautiful rhyming!




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