| + the gold from the drained blood | Marius Surleac [15.Aug.08 21:04] |
| Nice imagery, plastic view and a new wave I sense in your style Daniel. Simplicity within the personification of poetry. I congratulate you! Best wishes, Marius | |
| = Marius. | Daniel Lacatus [15.Aug.08 21:28] |
| I like much that you read and comment what I write. Thanks for the comment....and for stars | |
| = the perfect crime | Lee Ann Hardt [17.Aug.08 18:37] |
| I don't know if it's appropriate to leave someone else's poem as a comment, but this is really what it made me think of and I think a larger context is a good thing. So here it is: Introduction to Poetry Billy Collins I ask them to take a poem and hold it up to the light like a color slide or press an ear against its hive. I say drop a mouse into a poem and watch him probe his way out, or walk inside the poem's room and feel the walls for a light switch. I want them to waterski across the surface of a poem waving at the author's name on the shore. But all they want to do is tie the poem to a chair with rope and torture a confession out of it. They begin beating it with a hose to find out what it really means. Cheers, Lee Ann | |
| = ................. | Daniel Lacatus [21.Aug.08 11:17] |
Thank you for the comments! I'll rectify. Daniel | |