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Marius Surleac
[21.Aug.08 12:15]
"I feel" instead of "l feel"; "really" instead of "realty" (which means something else); "beyond dreams" instead of "of" and also would be better if you'll improve the idea and the text as well for a better flow of reading.

Thank you!




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