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Marius Surleac
[15.Nov.08 13:20]
I think you can improve the syntax here, the shape as well and maybe giving a note of mystery to the poem will be excellent.

best wishes,
Marius

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= !	Marius Surleac [15.Nov.08 13:20]
I think you can improve the syntax here, the shape as well and maybe giving a note of mystery to the poem will be excellent. best wishes, Marius