| = The word insight | Dan ªerbãnescu [18.Oct.08 09:41] |
| There is a saying herein There's the madness within In every word in the deep of the night There-s a tear out of sight This is what your poem inspired me to. A glimpse in the mind A word of a such kind | |
| = Melancholia... | John Willy Kopperud [18.Oct.08 16:05] |
| ...as I've hardly seen it from you, Chris. Nevertheless a well-shaped poem with fine images. Cheers from Willy | |
| = dan&willy. | Christopher Thripp [18.Oct.08 20:12] |
| thanks guys wanted to try something different ... as i am going madly insane lol...this fitted the bill ... i appreciate both your comments ... and dan love your words nice to inspire someone thank you | |
| = wiped anger | Marius Surleac [18.Oct.08 20:24] |
| I sustain Willy's idea - really melancholically written, new Chris is found to be back, diluted feelings, a poem with weight like pewter, anger as well. Cheers Chris, Marius | |
| = chris | Corina Gina Papouis [18.Oct.08 21:55] |
| going deep down in this one, aren't we!:)Hope that sadness within doesn't linger... Good text, a few (well chosen) words written with a sure hand: double impact! | |
| = marius /corina | Christopher Thripp [19.Oct.08 07:11] |
| hey i am good corina ...just trying to be mellow ...lol i like to get deep down and thoughtful every now and then ... i am enjoying writing again.. and thank you marius much appreciated ... always expect something different from me ...it would be boring otherwise... | |