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Marius Surleac
[15.Nov.08 13:59]
Syntax and spelling errors! Please check it again! Also the idea is nice but towards the end of the poem you loose it and I think the rhyme is a bit forced here.

Best wishes,
Marius

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= !	Marius Surleac [15.Nov.08 13:59]
Syntax and spelling errors! Please check it again! Also the idea is nice but towards the end of the poem you loose it and I think the rhyme is a bit forced here. Best wishes, Marius