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 =  deep...
Marius Surleac
[22.Nov.08 21:41]
Welcome back Victor!

I like this poem; I like the imagery suggested here - it's very visual, deep meanings, tough feelings. Different recognition for The above?

Well done!


 =  Victor
Corina Gina Papouis
[22.Nov.08 21:48]
I totally enjoyed this one! I sense that Goth feeling, my rotten one, so I came closer for a sniff. It's a bitter sweet poem with an interesting approach to self abandon through music...
loved the end:
'take care of my hopes
my rotten one'


 =  Feelings to be filled with words
Victor Potra
[22.Nov.08 22:11]
Corina and Marius, thank you for your appreciation. As you may know already, I have a lot of “visions”, some of them arise directly in English. What I still miss is the full poetic language (in English) to express it. I’ll try the cautious approach into this issue.
On the other hand, this will be a good exercise for starting: dealing with complex feeling by using a basic vocabulary. May prove to be a fertile challenge… :)

 =  come on!
Corina Gina Papouis
[22.Nov.08 23:02]
In my humble opinion English is at its best when served 'un-dressed':), without too much make-up. No excuses! Don't hold back, let it all out, I know you can:)...You entertain so much on the Romanian side show us what you're really made of...

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