| = deep... | Marius Surleac [22.Nov.08 21:41] |
| Welcome back Victor! I like this poem; I like the imagery suggested here - it's very visual, deep meanings, tough feelings. Different recognition for The above? Well done! Cheers, Marius | |
| = Victor | Corina Gina Papouis [22.Nov.08 21:48] |
| I totally enjoyed this one! I sense that Goth feeling, my rotten one, so I came closer for a sniff. It's a bitter sweet poem with an interesting approach to self abandon through music... loved the end: 'take care of my hopes my rotten one' Congrats! Corina | |
| = Feelings to be filled with words | Victor Potra [22.Nov.08 22:11] |
| Corina and Marius, thank you for your appreciation. As you may know already, I have a lot of “visions”, some of them arise directly in English. What I still miss is the full poetic language (in English) to express it. I’ll try the cautious approach into this issue. On the other hand, this will be a good exercise for starting: dealing with complex feeling by using a basic vocabulary. May prove to be a fertile challenge… :) | |
| = come on! | Corina Gina Papouis [22.Nov.08 23:02] |
| In my humble opinion English is at its best when served 'un-dressed':), without too much make-up. No excuses! Don't hold back, let it all out, I know you can:)...You entertain so much on the Romanian side show us what you're really made of... | |