| = ! | Corina Gina Papouis [06.Dec.08 21:46] |
| A wonderful poem, a few stunning images used here: 'the world is drunk of silence' - I would have used drunk with silence here... and 'the fallen-in-love climbers are resting next to the conquest' You handle words so gracefully, they seem to obey you so easily... Well done Florin! Best wishes , Corina | |
| = Corina | florin caragiu [06.Dec.08 22:21] |
| Hanks a lot, Corina, I made the needed correction. | |
| = erata | florin caragiu [06.Dec.08 22:23] |
| Thanks* | |
| = beautiful lines | Simona Sumanaru [13.Dec.08 15:40] |
| 'the night is growing in your arms' 'the world is drunk with silence' 'words I need not understand' 'wind is carrying you to my chariot-poem' (I'd say 'in my chariot-poem') great imagery! | |
| = Simona | florin caragiu [16.Dec.08 16:11] |
| welcome on my page. thanks a lot, I'm glad you like the poem, you have right, "in" may be better. best regards, Florin | |
| = Florin | Simona Sumanaru [16.Dec.08 18:48] |
| Good to be on your page. You managed quite a pictoresque zoom-out on the town, congratulations. | |