| = welcome new member! | Marius Surleac [15.Dec.08 10:39] |
| I read here a smart polished poem, a romantic love story well shaped, a good use of language with old style similarities, with rhythm, fluency. The same rhythm is to be be found as well in the other poem of yours "Twilight" - I like it. There's attention to the details as well. Well done and welcome new member! Best wishes, Marius | |
| = Fantastic | sayed iltaf haider [26.Jan.09 02:06] |
| I am wondder struck.Really a very nice poem. The dialogues reveal various aspects of love in this world of beings. | |