| = Approved, but... | John Willy Kopperud [18.Dec.08 23:51] |
| ...clearly not your best effort. You get too conventional. The images are a bit worse for wear and the opening line is decidedly not engaging. The direct mention of "poem" and "poems" are often a bore. But I know you can do much better! Cheers from Willy | |
| = Willi | Ioana Geier [19.Dec.08 00:23] |
| Willi, Thank you for all your help! Ioana | |