| = try to avoid bombing | Veronica Valeanu [02.Feb.09 10:54] |
| i think there are too many explanations inside the poem. some mistakes too:[it's queen] instead of [its queen] . "The heart degrading, head can’t stop thinking" - change this! what project?it doesn't make sense... if you enumerate many sensations related to the senses (hearing, seeing, touching) you will fail to intensify your intention and end up in weakening our desire to resonate with your level of perception. all the best, Veronica | |