| = Diana | Corina Gina Papouis [13.Jan.09 19:34] |
| it’s an interesting theme and a new attempt to construct your poem, however, I think the message is not as dramatic as the title promises. The last verse needs a little change there: ……‘complete silence.’ all the best and to many more! cheers, Corina | |
| = thanks | Diana Todea [13.Jan.09 20:22] |
| Thanks for the suggestion and for your time. Cheers, Diana. | |