| + when shalom's all gone... | Corina Gina Papouis [27.Jan.09 20:45] |
| what I liked about this text? every bit of it!:) ok, what I liked most? 'trapped between my why and theirs.' 'shalom's all gone unlost, unfound' the cutting edge of the ending is probably my favourite, and then the structure, the message, the power... best wishes, Corina | |
| = bits for Corina... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [27.Jan.09 20:51] |
| Thank you dear Corina for your display of kindness. Glad to have been at your service with morsels of my feelings. All blessings. | |
| = The struggling self... | John Willy Kopperud [28.Jan.09 10:54] |
| ...reflected through that same liquid surface as Noah and Narcissus were facing. Such a good narrative poem, Romulus, that I furnished it with a red star. Congratulations! Cheers from Willy | |
| = and Noah outlived Narcissus... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [28.Jan.09 11:36] |
| Thank you dear friend. Your appreciations are of double worth. Yours. | |
| + word of the poet | Edilberto González Trejos [05.Feb.09 02:09] |
| brilliant, strong yet CLEAR word, poet! | |