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= this poem reminds me of a movie
Laurenţiu Ion
[02.Feb.09 22:19]
I liked the image of the dark winter, which is very well achieved, starting from the point of contrasts. But I think the end is improper, because the sense rives from the rest.

= to be continued
Diana Todea
[05.Feb.09 11:52]
Yes, you're right, I think I'll give it a try in a sequel. Cheers, Di.

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= this poem reminds me of a movie	Laurenţiu Ion [02.Feb.09 22:19]
I liked the image of the dark winter, which is very well achieved, starting from the point of contrasts. But I think the end is improper, because the sense rives from the rest.

= to be continued	Diana Todea [05.Feb.09 11:52]
Yes, you're right, I think I'll give it a try in a sequel. Cheers, Di.