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Marius Surleac
[23.Feb.09 15:16]
My opinion is that the repetition of "fall" is too obsessive and doesn't help the poem. You can make it more clearer.
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Lydia Percy
[23.Feb.09 16:57]
Thank you I will consider your advise.
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