| = good one | Marius Surleac [29.Apr.09 20:29] |
| The idea is nice but the last stanza is brilliant - I think there's concentrated all the poetry. I also love how it develops like in a movie, the rush of the entire poem. Cheers! | |
| = the love affair | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Apr.09 23:19] |
| ..between the 'owner' and his/her minute:)...glad you liked it. cheers, Corina | |