| = Why? | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Apr.09 12:24] |
| I liked the decadence of this poem and the way it takes you down with it, in a self-destructive rhythm...and yet the question remains: why? Why, oh, why? ‘Is the question that drives us!’ (I think I heard that in the Matrix!:)) i also loved the symmetry of the verse: 'Why did I make you dance that dance' well, you didn't and you'll never know...:) I enjoyed it! Corina | |
| = Again thanks for the feedback! | Negru Iulia Daniela [12.May.09 20:56] |
| Thank you Corina! I still have to work on some of the verses... The music is not perfect! | |