| = Why?|
Corina Gina Papouis
|I liked the decadence of this poem and the way it takes you down with it, in a self-destructive rhythm...and yet the question remains: why? Why, oh, why? |
‘Is the question that drives us!’ (I think I heard that in the Matrix!:))
i also loved the symmetry of the verse: 'Why did I make you dance that dance'
well, you didn't and you'll never know...:)
I enjoyed it!
| = Again thanks for the feedback!|
Negru Iulia Daniela
|Thank you Corina! I still have to work on some of the verses... The music is not perfect!|