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= Re Walls
Corina Gina Papouis
[30.Apr.09 17:26]
It's a good poem, Gunsel, thank you for sharing it with us. It’s written with such intensity and vividness. I was wondering if at the verse:
‘Hey! Walls
Stop counting the glass anymore’

It would sound better:

‘Hey! Walls
Stop counting the windows’

But then of course I have no idea what the original sound like...:)

Regards,
Corina

= re: The Walls
Gunsel DJEMAL
[01.May.09 08:47]
Thanks for your comment,I have made an ammendment, have a look.
Actually this poem is a little bit drunk!

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= Re Walls	Corina Gina Papouis [30.Apr.09 17:26]
It's a good poem, Gunsel, thank you for sharing it with us. It’s written with such intensity and vividness. I was wondering if at the verse: ‘Hey! Walls Stop counting the glass anymore’ It would sound better: ‘Hey! Walls Stop counting the windows’ But then of course I have no idea what the original sound like...:) Regards, Corina

= re: The Walls	Gunsel DJEMAL [01.May.09 08:47]
Thanks for your comment,I have made an ammendment, have a look. Actually this poem is a little bit drunk!