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 =  29th of April
Corina Gina Papouis
[01.May.09 12:17]
...a beautiful day, a beautiful text... a bridge between yesterday and tomorrow, awaiting the moment to come, celebrating the moment that passed,'s all about that chase!
Nice imagery!


 =  Thank you, Corina.
Ada Ionescu
[04.May.09 19:23]
Corina, the keen eye, your valuing of the lines above and the sympathetical understanding of the poem really means a lot to me.
Thank you.

 =  your poem
Simona Sumanaru
[05.May.09 11:47]
reminds me of Tagore's tone, only you are more settled while his heart was burning for the love of God. Nice work

 =  A very small gift to you, Sim.
Ada Ionescu
[05.May.09 22:27]
Dear Sim... I'm so glad you enjoyed what I've wrote!
I also like your poetry and your presence is always very soft and reassuring.
This is my gift to you:

"I thought that my voyage had come to its end
at the last limit of my power - the path before me was closed,
provisions exhausted
and the time came to take shelter in a silent obscurity.

But I find that thy will knows no end in me.
And when old words die out on the tongue,
new melodies break forth from the heart;
and where the old tracks are lost,
new land is revealed with its unbelievable wonders."

Tagore - "Closed Path"

 =  Dear Ada
Simona Sumanaru
[11.May.09 19:33]
I cannot but hope I am worthy of your gift and words. Thank you so much!

Here is something for you; I meant this along the same lines.

And as I learn I beg of Thee
do not reveal what lies ahead
for the road is long
and I may forget
but give me eyes, good strength, and wit
for what is growing at my feet
as on my journey that's what makes me stumble
and fall

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